WULF
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Post by WULF on Apr 24, 2006 7:28:51 GMT -5
A page from "My girlfriend's a Zombie" by are man Dwight Macpherson. It's gonna be in Cryptic magazine issue 3 by Dead Dog. It's a little different for me. Let me know what you guys think. I was trying to get a look similar to the Bill and Mandy cartoon. peace WULF
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Post by dwightlmacpherson on Apr 24, 2006 13:27:22 GMT -5
Rawkin'.
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Cadre
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Post by Cadre on Apr 24, 2006 13:46:00 GMT -5
my thoughts... for what they're worth...
think in ways that the light source is in front of the figure dynamically... perhaps cast a shadow behind the figure to exemplify this... also think in ways of depth and tonal value when considering texture and light source... notably the steps and the walls...
looking good otherwise... keep 'em comin'
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Post by smile4chaos on Apr 24, 2006 19:13:49 GMT -5
it looks good to me, i dont know what the coloring source your talking about is though
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Post by jainitai on Apr 24, 2006 21:24:51 GMT -5
it looks good to me, i dont know what the coloring source your talking about is though I think he's saying that you've got two light sources going on in that last panel, but it would be more dramatic to just have the one coming from the hole in the ground and throw a shadow behind the guy and on the stairs. I would agree. That light coming through the door at the top of the stairs looks somehow "off" or fake, like a pink spotlight shining down. I like the textures you've got going on though, Wulf.
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gots0
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Post by gots0 on Apr 25, 2006 13:26:13 GMT -5
ill check this out. Thanks for the post.
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Post by smile4chaos on Apr 26, 2006 18:45:05 GMT -5
nah, jai i was talking about the bill and mindy look.
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